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Lonely Stars by: MaddyMat
Lonely hearts seek occupied spaces
Falling for those which you have no chance
seeking the possibilities of a sign
to live the feeling of, an unavailable,
to even feel the effects of a broken,
A mended and the change that follows.
When dreams are unreachable
like the moons of pluto or the night of the sun
and reality is like, death in war.
Thiers lonely hearts waiting, seeking their occupied space.
their eyes are stuck on their stars and are
blinded by the night, surrounding them,
where other lonely hearts wait with you.
Meanwhile your their star, their pluto,
their dream of reality, their sole light
in the blinding darkness.
Lonely hearts seek occupied spaces
Falling for those which you have no chance
seeking the possibilities of a sign
to live the feeling of, an unavailable,
to even feel the effects of a broken,
A mended and the change that follows.
When dreams are unreachable
like the moons of pluto or the night of the sun
and reality is like, death in war.
Thiers lonely hearts waiting, seeking their occupied space.
their eyes are stuck on their stars and are
blinded by the night, surrounding them,
where other lonely hearts wait with you.
Meanwhile your their star, their pluto,
their dream of reality, their sole light
in the blinding darkness.
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Ok here's the deal, i wrote this originally as it was going to be a song (hence its page 5, in my song book)
but it ended up turning into a poem which is wierd and very diffrent for me (it also looks alot longer written out)
its a poem about my friend in my (Open Your Eyes) song and this is a more gental ... might i say romanticly described then the more angrier song. (which is wierd because this was written some couple of days after the song, not sure when)
All in all i hope you enjoy!
Orinally written 14/11/06
Typed 24/06/07
*MaddyMat
EXPECIALLY FOR MY POEMS
Comments and Critism are always encouraged
but it ended up turning into a poem which is wierd and very diffrent for me (it also looks alot longer written out)
its a poem about my friend in my (Open Your Eyes) song and this is a more gental ... might i say romanticly described then the more angrier song. (which is wierd because this was written some couple of days after the song, not sure when)
All in all i hope you enjoy!
Orinally written 14/11/06
Typed 24/06/07
*MaddyMat
EXPECIALLY FOR MY POEMS
Comments and Critism are always encouraged
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sweet poem